I won't lie I struggled with the first 50% of the book. I found it to be slow and I wasn't fully invested in the characters or story. However, after certain events that happen at that point I became fully invested in the characters and story. When I first started reading the book, I made three predictions around the 12% mark about where the story was going to go and what reveals Hunter was going to make along the way and I was right of two out of the three predictions. So there wasn't as many surprises along the way as I would have liked. This very much follows some of the typical Romantasy tropes out there (insta-love, fated mates, rivals to lovers, rebellion and more). Though I will say I did not expect where Hunter too the book at the end.
I appreciated the Dual POVs and loved the two magic systems that has been presented. The difference from the Dragon riders and the Witches is quite pronounced in the book, with the Dragon riders being on top. I loved that although Astrid is unable to wield magic she has found other ways to use it through her potions. I also loved the familiars (and that not all of them were cats) and Dragons and that Hunter allows the reader to know what is being communicated between them. I especially loved Bastet and his dry sense of humour.
One thing I wasn't the greatest fan of was everyone wanting to protect Astrid, like she was some delicate flower that need protection Constantly. No, she is actually a badass witch in her own right and I think people should have respected that more. Especially as she has basically been preparing to die her entire life, and the strength and pose she shows with that aspect is commendable. This also made me feel bad for Skylar as it always appears that she has no one in her corner.
Also it seemed like we were waiting for the dual FOREVER. Like Hunter found every possible thing to do before the actual dual and then we the dual gets here, well, it was a little lack luster in my opinion.
This was a good start to the series, but the more I think about it, the more I think that Hunter tried to do too much in the first book, that it came off at slow at the start and then had a complete 180 by the end of where they were going to take the story. I think the overall flow of the book was off. Now would i continue the series, yes. I did like where they eventually took the book and was able to get invested by the character and I want to see where they take it next.


